Waves

I felt the wind slap my legs, I felt it rush through my hair. I saw the water gush past me as it settles far behind. I think to myself will I fall will I stand. But the future can not be told. It felt like I was flying, hovering above the ground. The waves where at a admirable distance but sooner or later they where to get closer. The time had come and I bent my knees. The waves pushed me up and down. But I stood my ground as if the waves where bullies.

3 thoughts on “Waves

  1. Absolutely delightful Ruby and worthy of this week’s class showcase- check out the comment I left you on Nightzookeeper
    Ant

  2. Wow!

    That was absolutely outstanding! I thought the way you used so many metaphors and similes was perfect.

    It almost seemed like a poem, but it was just a very descriptive paragraph. Well done.

    Keep up the good work, Erica

  3. Hi Ruby,
    Great 100wc!
    I thought it was very creative and your word choice was excillent for your great idea!
    Well Done!
    Adriana

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