I felt the wind slap my legs, I felt it rush through my hair. I saw the water gush past me as it settles far behind. I think to myself will I fall will I stand. But the future can not be told. It felt like I was flying, hovering above the ground. The waves where at a admirable distance but sooner or later they where to get closer. The time had come and I bent my knees. The waves pushed me up and down. But I stood my ground as if the waves where bullies.
Absolutely delightful Ruby and worthy of this week’s class showcase- check out the comment I left you on Nightzookeeper
Ant
Wow!
That was absolutely outstanding! I thought the way you used so many metaphors and similes was perfect.
It almost seemed like a poem, but it was just a very descriptive paragraph. Well done.
Keep up the good work, Erica
Hi Ruby,
Great 100wc!
I thought it was very creative and your word choice was excillent for your great idea!
Well Done!
Adriana